Yeah, that happens-
BRMU 😈
Yes, for real, felt. This is so very true. My goodness, it's better when you're the author xD I have a bit more perspective, however grim 😂
I wrote something at an ungodly hour this morning and I haven't proof read so HAVE FUN 😁😈
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She was in the galley, sitting on a brown beaten countertop, breathing the rich smell of tobacco.
A short pipe twisted in deft, dirt stained fingers, and she smoked on account of nostalgia. The good...
Me:
Tay roved
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Tay stood at
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Tay had
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Tay leaned on the taffrail, callused fi
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Mmbruh.
'I need shower thoughts'
*Stumbles to shower*
*Is taking shower*
*Realizes this is mildly hilarious*
*Is still dripping wet and exits mid shower and must...
Dude, I wouldn't be able to get over it if it did. We shouldn't be so unpredictable 🤣😭 We should weild the plot with dexterity.
But nah.
Instead, we let 'er rrun wherreverr the heck sshheee wwaanntssz-
Tay's lips hung loose, and she blinked a few times, not daring to move. "Oh my gosh. They're crazy," she breathed. "They're- actually.. well." She paused, exhaling through her soft words, "we're all just.. crazy."
Tay took in a long breath and followed the salty creature with a hesitant gait.
"For certain, Jin, but below decks. We can waste the afternoon on it. Anything to escape the sun."
Her skin shone pale and grayed, and already she could feel the suns threat to sink in dreadful blisters. The bite...
Love this.
Lol, this is great.
But I feel what you mean- I actually REALLY get in the element after reading something with really good prose. Then I just- yk, take it on in my own version. 👌
For a moment the small, recently-employed-party stood in tight, excited silence, all eyes on the noble Captain as she strode from her extravagant deck. The morning sun had risen to a dangerous height, and Tay dreaded the trials of yet another day of anonymity. But there were more grateful...
Tay scratched an unruly sign into the parchment, then stepped back and tossed the pen to the table.
"Handle that well, now," she said, nodding to the contract. "It'll be worth money someday." She leaned toward Jintao, casting him a crippled sort-of look. "If not for only my signature, then for...
Eyes locked on the stained paper, Tay took the pen into her firm hands and leaned up on the desk. She drug her heel across the ground and rapped her knuckles across the smooth wood, feeling the ship loll.
She hated it.
She rolled her bottom lip with white teeth. "Devils, must it be my real...
"Do you have a contract?" Tay asked. The black fabric of her dress pulled tight as she folded her arms. "How long must I sign on for? Because I'd like to retire from this circus in the near future. Say.." she cocked her head, "the next port."
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