BYC’s Got Talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[azurbanclucker]

And being weird

and talking to yourself, though you don't have a monopoly on that around here

 

[Logar]

Oh I’m also really good at not cussing in front of the parental units

 

[Dominique King]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!

 

[OrpingtonManiac]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!
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Its Definitely a talent!!

 

[Logar]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!
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Want a suggestion? I'm not a good writer but I did notice something

 

[Logar]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!
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it looks great though!

 

[The Moonshiner]

Want a suggestion? I'm not a good writer but I did notice something

 

[Logar]

Just for you Moony I'll say it

Spoiler

Where it says "said a short, silver haired she-wolf with silver eyes" using silver twice so close together, in my opinion, makes the description sound a bit repetitive and less interesting when compared to something like "said a short, silver haired she-wolf with her shimmering, deep set gray eyes fixed on the dancing glow of the fire"

 

[Noraaaaa]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!
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thats super good!!!

Spoiler: ideas

make sure you check your grammar and , and . usage.

 

[Barbours]

This isn’t really a talent but I haven’t tried to write one in for a long time! This is just the prologue!
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Beautiful, Domino!