I don't know much about poetry, but I think your poem is an excellent reflection of your knowledge of and interest in military history and how you feel about duty and honor. All that sounds good to me!
I smiled that you named your betta "Fish." For more than a decade, I had a cat named "Kitty Kitty." Neither of us gets points for creativity
My family kept freshwater tropical fish when I was growing up, and my mom's favorites were always the bettas. As an adult, I used to keep aquariums, too. I've only had a couple of goldfish, and neither lived long enough to outgrow their tanks.
So far this year, there hasn't been a problem with feather pecking, unlike last year when the Taj Ma-Coop girls all kept each other's butts picked clean and red.
However, the runner drakes are crazy with spring hormones. Traditionally, they choose to over-mate Blair, a submissive silver girl, causing her to bleed from the back of her head. I have been keeping her away from the flock this week, hoping the boys will calm down soon and I can quit applying Neosporin to her wounds.
Has Antonia had her appointment yet? If so, have you found out if she's really an Antonia or an Anthony? I had to rename one of the dumped cats that I originally thought was female. Turns out, Jinx is the perfect name for him; he is the troublemaker of the group.
I smiled that you named your betta "Fish." For more than a decade, I had a cat named "Kitty Kitty." Neither of us gets points for creativity

My family kept freshwater tropical fish when I was growing up, and my mom's favorites were always the bettas. As an adult, I used to keep aquariums, too. I've only had a couple of goldfish, and neither lived long enough to outgrow their tanks.
So far this year, there hasn't been a problem with feather pecking, unlike last year when the Taj Ma-Coop girls all kept each other's butts picked clean and red.
However, the runner drakes are crazy with spring hormones. Traditionally, they choose to over-mate Blair, a submissive silver girl, causing her to bleed from the back of her head. I have been keeping her away from the flock this week, hoping the boys will calm down soon and I can quit applying Neosporin to her wounds.
Has Antonia had her appointment yet? If so, have you found out if she's really an Antonia or an Anthony? I had to rename one of the dumped cats that I originally thought was female. Turns out, Jinx is the perfect name for him; he is the troublemaker of the group.