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chocolate orpingtons are legitimately one of the pretties chickens I think I've ever seen
Heres hazel:
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Also, have you seen gold-laced orpingtons?
 
@Noraaaaa

Note your use of the word "I". That will be important in my next bit for re-writing.
Who is this Holly? Is she your best friend? Your sister? Your pet squirrel?
I briskly walked into the ring. Spotting Holly, my (relation Here), and Diva,her big bay mare, I walked up to her and poked her shoulder.

Is this your line or Holly's? If it is yours, I personally would add it to the top paragraph. If it is Holly's, I would specifically state so.
Candy canes, trees, and bows were also part of the arrangement.
AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR APPROPRIATELY PLACED COMMAS!!!!
(I will continue, just have to do some chores)
Thank you so so so so much! That was super helpful!!!! You had GREAT ideas!
 
me too! we raise them for meat but I love them all so much, my dad always tells me no matter how attached we can't keep any, but we do have 2 really friendly females that are just pets. ae saved them last year because of how attached we got.
Yes its hard!! we raise formeat as well, and we have tried to raise a couple, but they are so fragile with us. My last one who was going to be and inside pet turkey, i even made a pouch for him he would perch on my shoulder and sit in my lap while i did school, he even had a daiper and a cage in my room (No it did not smell i kept it clean) but we had to go out or a weekend so we put him in an outside brooder and he kept trying to fly out that he hit his head.
 

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