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[african chickens]

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this is for a school project so i want to know what different people think (end of year learning celebration)

 

[Lemon-Drop]

It looks really good!

If you don't want constructive criticism, then I wouldn't read further, but here are my thoughts.

• I really like the proportions of tree to cub. It looks great!
• The snout looks a little long and curved in your drawing. I would see if you could shorten it and make it a little straighter.
• The log that the cub is walking on is nice and straight, but then suddenly gets a little thinner and curves upwards. I would try and straighten it out a little.
• You could try tracing (printing the picture and placing a blank piece of paper over it, and taping it to a window so you can see the lines through it) to get those proportions really good.
• The left hind leg in the picture is bent slightly, so maybe try giving it a similar bend.
• The tail also is a little straighter and goes farther away from the cub in the picture.
• The background is good, but maybe try blending it and spending a little bit of time making it even, instead of the swirls.
• Here's a good guide on drawing a tiger cub, which could help with proportions and texture. link
• Depending on your age, school level, how long you're supposed to spend on it, how much of your grade this counts for, I would try to edit a few of these details.
• But, I think it looks amazing! Really good job!

 

[african chickens]

It looks really good!

If you don't want constructive criticism, then I wouldn't read further, but here are my thoughts.

• I really like the proportions of tree to cub. It looks great!
• The snout looks a little long and curved in your drawing. I would see if you could shorten it and make it a little straighter.
• The log that the cub is walking on is nice and straight, but then suddenly gets a little thinner and curves upwards. I would try and straighten it out a little.
• You could try tracing (printing the picture and placing a blank piece of paper over it, and taping it to a window so you can see the lines through it) to get those proportions really good.
• The left hind leg in the picture is bent slightly, so maybe try giving it a similar bend.
• The tail also is a little straighter and goes farther away from the cub in the picture.
• The background is good, but maybe try blending it and spending a little bit of time making it even, instead of the swirls.
• Here's a good guide on drawing a tiger cub, which could help with proportions and texture. link
• Depending on your age, school level, how long you're supposed to spend on it, how much of your grade this counts for, I would try to edit a few of these details.
• But, I think it looks amazing! Really good job!

thanks
i am gonna give you my opinions on what you said

• thank you
• i think your right ill try to fix that
• oops ill fix that
• that is not how i like to do it i try to steer away from tracing its too babyish to me
• ill see if i can fix that that area gave me a lot of trouble
• ill make his tail longer
• i like the background
• i am on a school device so i cant access that site
• its for the end of the year learning celebration to show off what we have learned i am in middle school
• thanks again

 

[african chickens]

It looks really good!

If you don't want constructive criticism, then I wouldn't read further, but here are my thoughts.

• I really like the proportions of tree to cub. It looks great!
• The snout looks a little long and curved in your drawing. I would see if you could shorten it and make it a little straighter.
• The log that the cub is walking on is nice and straight, but then suddenly gets a little thinner and curves upwards. I would try and straighten it out a little.
• You could try tracing (printing the picture and placing a blank piece of paper over it, and taping it to a window so you can see the lines through it) to get those proportions really good.
• The left hind leg in the picture is bent slightly, so maybe try giving it a similar bend.
• The tail also is a little straighter and goes farther away from the cub in the picture.
• The background is good, but maybe try blending it and spending a little bit of time making it even, instead of the swirls.
• Here's a good guide on drawing a tiger cub, which could help with proportions and texture. link
• Depending on your age, school level, how long you're supposed to spend on it, how much of your grade this counts for, I would try to edit a few of these details.
• But, I think it looks amazing! Really good job!

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